By The Water

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Frank tugged the glove off and put it aside, already finding fresh bait for the hook. Beside him, Jake watched vigilantly, still waiting for magic to happen.

The hook was cast; the line bowed under the catch, nearly snapping.

He didn’t notice the missing glove until later.

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2 thoughts on “By The Water”

  1. That’s good. You used the glove exactly as it appears. I like this. Love Jake standing there waiting for magic to happen. I can see it. That is what is meant by show don’t tell. I need to read more of your writing.

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