freeze

let’s freeze this moment
in time and pretend we won’t
forget in five years.

remembering is
reduced to this: one moment
trapped under plastic.

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2 thoughts on “freeze”

  1. I can’t decide which I enjoy more, they are both so excellent. I think perhaps the second one just for the comment it makes on remembering. Thanks for inspiring! 🙂

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