it’s a night to realize.
cold air spills from the
open fridge jolting me awake.
my thoughts run clearer now,
though the spell is temporary.
harsh white light is blinding
against the darkness of 3am.
ease the door shut quietly,
break the spell and sleep.
it doesn’t work like that
though because now’s a realization.
eyes sting with chilled tears,
you were never actually here.
in love with an idea.
wow that is dark, nicely done!
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Thank you!
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Woah. Just woah. Amazing job, l really how you made me feel like I was there too. The first line reminds me of the song realize by Colbie Caillat. Lol that song makes my eyes water a little bit (now you know i’m a softie) XD. Also check out my prompt below. Its pretty interesting.
http://franzical.wordpress.com/2014/10/30/ode-to-a-condiment/
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I have not heard that song – might have to check it out.
Thank you so much!
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No problem. Glad to read your prompt!
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